Comments on Kingdom Eadhaolin

Would like a picture where the exact bounds are as it seems quite large. Other than that it sounds good. Other significant settlements might also be nice but it's fine as-is.

My knights are going to be haughtier than yours. Otherwise I like the picture. Always had a soft spot for breadbasket nations.

A recent History section would not go amiss...

Also another visit to the Declare Your Allegiance topic would probably be a good call.

I'll edit the other major settlements in. I also have no idea how to draw where on the map this country would be so some pointers would be nice.

Save the image in the map thread, use MS paint and spend about an hour drawing outlines, optionally fill it in with a similar though different color. It's how I did Sciras. Also, try to make your own little triangles, circles, and stars and whatnot.

MidgetNinja wrote:A recent History section would not go amiss...

Reiterated because it's REALLY F**KING IMPORTANT!!!

Thank you.

Done.

Thank you Crom

Pretty good. Just need that map with rough (or better) boundaries and I'll pass it through.

Map added. Please remove the image when you put in the new forum though as it is rather crude. I have very limited skills with MS paint.

I'll leave it as long as Bronx needs it to be left up.

Just went ahead and posted the image in the map thread.